It’s not bad for a first attempt, the first baffle at the intake is doing nothing for you, you can leave it out. Or you can move it next to the 13” baffle so the water leaving the skimmer area would go under it then over the next to the fudge. This will help with removing the proteins in the water as they tend to float at the top the baffle will keep them in the skimmer area longer. There’s no harm in having the filter sock and inlet in the same area as the skimmer. Remember the smaller the area for the return pump the larger the chance for the pump to run dry. All your evaporation loss will happen in the return chamber.